Jovani Ramos

  https://youtu.be/6Qlf7QFNT1M The changes that were made in the peer review process were a narration that gave background to the storyline. Without this narration the audience would have been confused with the actions depicted in the opener.

What specific elements of the film opening did you like? Was there anything that left you confused? (be specific) What suggestions do you have for changes? Great intro camera angle and quality commentary going throughout. Were the other two kids against the lonely kid? They could've showed a quick clip at the end with becoming all friends. Some of their camera angles/shots were very interesting and made the film look professional I think the plot is that they bumped into each other in the halls multiple times, and then in detention he stood up for him, but I'm not exactly sure. change some of the transitions, and maybe include more obvious instances of the two main characters being "polar opposites" to make the storyline make more sense I loved the camera angles and the way this was filmed. The beginning shot with the drone was AWESOME. There were

 

 In these two photos you can see Luca finishing up our last couple of minutes of editing.  In the second photo you can see luca adjusting the length of our most important clip. 

 In these two photos we see Luca struggling to edit our clips together in order to reach the time limit. Throughout the editing process, our main problem was regarding music and finding music that was not copyrighted that would also relatively fit our film. In the second picture you can see Luca conjoining our clips to make them seem more natural rather than plain transitions

Our second day of filming is when we got a majority of our shots. In the film I play the 'popular kid' that is recognized by everyone. In the film opening I am walking to detention, the lighting of the scene was good because we just needed the lighting from the hallway of the school. the scenes that we filmed will allow us to show the viewers the main character and what the movie is about but it doesn't give away any explicit details.